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Universalfantasy June 2014 Raffle Prize

ArkaDarkArtist

Published: Jul 19, 2014

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This is the prize for the winner of the first

monthly raffle

The winner this time was

If you want a free drawing from me, join UniversalFantasy and participate on these awesome raffles!

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Daecus

Jul 21, 2014

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You did very well with the proportions this time! Very good! You also succeeded in making the keyblade metallic, something that I see you skirting around in other works. I really like the background, too! A suggestion: since both arms are thrown more behind the girl, the stitching on the arm for the jacket on the left should apply to the right, as well. Making the chest more symmetrical would have made the posing look a little better. The belly button and muscle need to face the left a little, since the hips are facing more to the left. For the socks(?), one of the socks looks bigger than the other.

Overall, great work. You did better than you normally do! ^^